Tuesday, 18 October 2016

Final design and evaluation review Part 2

In pairs/three's we all gave feedback on each person's poster. These are the feedback I got from both of them.

Good feedback:
1. the writing stands out
2. Colours work together, mostly the red and black writing

Improvement 
1. Add more Images
2.Get the whole picture (Car light missing)

My own feedback is that I think that the darkest goes well in the poster along with the colourings because there're not that bright of a colours and I think it goes well with how dark the poster is. In all honesty I do/don't agree with the more image feedback.
Do's because maybe I could have took a picture of the road with the sky giving it more of an image along with a car. Why I don't is because I think the lonely car on the road is part of the film and it show's, and I think that the book in the background with the quote it look better because the words of the serial killer hangs over him and so putting the car under the writing does that.

I think that if they had seen the tailer and the original poster they might think of the poster differently maybe, I'm not sure but I think the poster has enough images.

What could have been better is the writing on the right side of the page, it could have been more in the middle then near the edge. Another is the title although they did get that it was the title I think that it could have looked better maybe having the red in the title dribble down or something. I made the title bigger so that it would stand out more and people would get that it was the title but I think I could have added to the title something better then the underline and the spray spots.

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