PT5

The start of the pitch, I was scared, I could hear in my voices that I was nervous, but went through with it and got it all out and presented my pitch. What I could have done better is try and keep my voice from sounding nervous. Another, from the feedback from Nick, I could have tested out the word search out with kids. Another was the spaces on the menu, which didn't help with the size of the words so that is something that needed improvement on.

I was also asked if the menus I saw as paper or digital. I saw the menus as paper only because with digital if using the internet you can't always guarantee you'll get internet access.

I did get ask by Lousie about if this is something that I would like to see, being a regular customer and I explained that it would be nice to have a paper menu and for someone like me who even with glasses hasn't got brilliant eyesight, I have to get close to the board to see what I want then go into the line. Now I know as the line goes forwards I get closer to the board, but it's nice to already know what to have before getting into the line or just being able to go straight into the line and not have to go to the board, read it whilst others are getting into the line and then I get to stand in line, further away then what I could have been if I could have a paper menu to look at in the line or to already have a paper menu and know what I want. Plus it's nice to be able to read whilst waiting.

The kid's menu, Nick pointed out that it'll be good for the kids who are waiting and to keep them occupied whilst waiting or at Bath Rugby whilst one parent is getting the one the other could be doing the word search with their kids, keeping the kids together and working together as a family.

If I were to do the pitch again, I would write down note's down keywords just to help with my nerves. Because even though I knew what I wanted to say and did say I think the notes could have helped me keep calm.

I think overall I did well for someone who hates presenting and talking in front of others. I think both menus were good but could use improving.

Feedback's I got about my menus were the blackness, another was menu 1 the front with the gaps could have been filled in. Again with the kids menu it could have had a different background colour then black and also along with the word search because of the shack was mainly hidden by the black background. Another were the word all tightly together and needed to be spread out a bit more.